tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5523028.post110329519346128684..comments2023-09-28T16:49:04.656+05:30Comments on Literary Mosaic: Of Silver Linings and RainbowsUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5523028.post-1103454772623853792004-12-19T16:42:00.000+05:302004-12-19T16:42:00.000+05:30ummmm... somehow, the name annahita appeals to me ...ummmm... somehow, the name annahita appeals to me - it did, even in the earlier story - wonder wat it means?<br />the story was sweet - bracing, especially the dialogue. character sketch was great - if a mite despondent. I think, as you keep on writing more and more and more, your technique will eveolve even further! ;-) carry on thrilling, geebaby!livinghighhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05503925642639597218noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5523028.post-1103419599383283982004-12-19T06:56:00.000+05:302004-12-19T06:56:00.000+05:30Beautiful, Geetanjali. This one gave me goosebumps...Beautiful, Geetanjali. This one gave me goosebumps towards the ending!<br /><br />I really like the start also; for me, it symbolizes the story to come.<br /><br />"She kicked into the castle, smiling bitterly as it collapsed. Its walls breached, the waves rushed into its courtyards, flooding it, destroying its foundations. She stood there watching it dissolveā¦". : A : .https://www.blogger.com/profile/04410256917258728976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5523028.post-1103385664498847222004-12-18T21:31:00.000+05:302004-12-18T21:31:00.000+05:30somewhere inbetween i lost consciousness, its a go...somewhere inbetween i lost consciousness, its a good thing !Sreekesh Menonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14465346378210758786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5523028.post-1103331122760834082004-12-18T06:22:00.000+05:302004-12-18T06:22:00.000+05:30Got a typo on the first line of the third para, it...Got a typo on the first line of the third para, its "tears". This story appeals to my oft cynical heart :-) I am not sure if I am qualified to give constructive criticism, but I think you could bring out the despondency of Anahita better to enhance the impact of the story. That said, I really think this is excellent work (believe me, oh, please do :-))Parthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10756964089084413413noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5523028.post-1103299194278302292004-12-17T21:29:00.000+05:302004-12-17T21:29:00.000+05:30Brilliant mademoiselle! (Now I don't say that just...Brilliant mademoiselle! (Now I don't say that just because it is poignant story).Deepakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01734304174271996942noreply@blogger.com